Writing Session 7- Proof Reading V Editing

Nicola's Notes from Alison Davis: Effective Writing- Section on editing and proof reading

Success Criteria? WALT? Learning Questions? How do kids know what they are learning?
We split into two teams

1.
Gillian
Shona
John
Gabrielle

2.
Suz
Scott
Ximena
Anna
Nicola

Notes from session:

Gillian: Visual editing card co-constructed
Developing by focusing on one element at a time (eg. finger spaces)
Some students, as they become more able can deal with more.
Has begun using some visual cues related to genres.

Shona: Using SC on the board at the start of lessons. Some focus on surface features, Capitals and full stops
What we used last year - similar set for a while

writing tasks are kept tight
Feeding forward before they write - setting a goal along the way comments in the book
editing visuals
editing card visuals


Anna is using - checklists
tools that kids can use as their own success criteria
editing checklists
green light orange light - focusing on just this
“He is my buddy when I don’t have one”
Questioning - learner attributes - making links to LA through writing
Editing card for HFW

Editing is ‘Being a Thinker’ by………..
IYT Coaching - You are being a thinker -
Helping Circle - need to be more explicit
What did we do today to make our writing better?
Matrices - which ones do kids understand?

How could we re-word - more concrete ?
Can we see a Progressions of editing/sc/tools across the school.
Are we proof reading or editing ? or both ? 

Editing as they write - Gail Loane

Scott is using:




Seniors are using: Poem Success Criteria

Goal setting folder: Goal Setting

For next week. Try something new. Bring along photos and share what has worked/ has not worked. 

Something to think about...

September 4th 2017 UDL, Inquiry and Maths/ Observation Triples

Further reading: What is Mathematical Beauty? Teaching through Big Ideas and Connections: Jo Boaler

Here is a run down for Maths Triples Next week and the week after.  There are a few group changes etc .  We also really want to 'join the dots' between our PLD Foci/meetings , WBS initiatives such as triples observations, teaching goals etc and student outcomes.  

 FOCUS of Maths Triples -    Improve student outcomes in maths                        

For these triples please think about the sorts of things you might want to demonstrate/explore/discuss during your sessions.

Please keep in mind the things we have looked at already so that the session is relevant:

-Using growth mindset in Maths

-Maths as a creative realm and the application of flexible thinking

-Visualisation in Maths, number talks

-Collaborative problem solving

-Formative assessment, student voice in learning, self evaluation and goal  setting

                         

There is likely to be quite a lot of cross- over with some of these things.  It is bound to be really interesting.  Exciting!

During this session we will also be setting Teaching goals :

These goals will focus on student outcomes.  What difference will ‘numbertalks’ or…………. make to this group/individual .... and where will they be by.........  How will you know ?    What will you see/collect/gather ?  What will they be able to do ?

Timetable

Week 7			Week 8
Time	Monday John Wanwan Susie	Tuesday Nicola   Scott Anna		Monday Shona Gabrielle Gillian Chris
	04 Sept	05 Sept		11 Sept
			9.00-9.30
9.00 - 9.20			9.30-10.00	Chris - Suz/Jude
9.20 - 11.00	John - Hayley	Nicola-Chrissy	10.00-10.40	Gabrielle - Kathryn
11.40- 1.00	Wanwan-Sherwin	Scott - Sherwin	11.40-1.00	Gillian-Hayley
1.40 - 3.00	Susie - Kathryn	Anna - Hayley	1.40-3.00	Shona - Sherwin

First 20 minutes:   Share how your Maths programme is structured.  

Before Observation - Person being observed will share:

• focus for the lesson, background to student needs in maths
• the planning - lesson sequence overview and student outcomes
• personal goals in teaching maths - or your Teaching as Inquiry

During Observation:

• note teaching strategies/behaviours
• what students are doing in relation to these
• what is effective?
• what could be improved?

After Observation discuss:

• what were the strengths?
• what could be improved?
• questions to think about/consider
• set a teaching goal for the next 4 weeks.  We will reflect on this during an admin meeting.

What staff said...

Teachers

Students

Planning linking to real world context/ Inquiry Provide contexts Posing questions (creativity, materials and opportunity to explore) Direct teaching (strategy and knowledge) Number Talks (visual, language) Formative Assessment Scaffolding Modeling Think aloud Open ended tasks Appropriately pitched UDL Authentic- linking strand to number Reflecting Feedback Provocations Provide a variety of materials Low floor/ high ceiling activities Maximising teachable moments (being nimble) Capturing learning Knowing the learner Knowing content

Exploring Answering Questioning Sharing Collaborating Showing Explaining Creative Output Being creative/ flexibe Doing (measuring, questioning, trial and error) Practising Proving Thinking Games Practise skills Think aloud Having learning conversations Taking risks Being curious Choosing how to investigate Visualise Imaging Reflecting Teaching others Solving real problems Opportunities to share/ celebrate Students as mathematicians

Inquiry Internal Evaluation

We have been working through an Internal Evaluation for Inquiry. 

After multiple discussions with the staff, we have identified what we need to prioritise:

1. There needs to be a consistent planning format across the school. 
2. We need school wide success criteria for measuring soft skills/ key competencies
3. We need consistent language when developing SC, positively framed, they are based on Bloom’s Taxonomy and they distinguish between conceptual and procedural knowledge.
4. In order to tell the learning story, we need to unpack how best to use success criteria and communicate each criterion. We feel that breaking it into parts may be more effective than treating it as a whole. Seesaw is the vehicle for telling the learning story. 

ACTION: Staff need to plan for the use of the managing self success criteria formatively.  

Chose just one part at a time.

We need to have some information to share around this for our Inquiry Internal Evaluation and are conscious that it's week 6 already! Half way through the term!

Next week we will be sending out a survey also so that we can get more evidence of our practice in Inquiry.

Please familiarise yourselves as to where we are up to:

Inquiry Internal Evaluation